For you, I am the rainbow’s grace
A sight to see, after the rain;
A dawn to light, from darkest night
Destined to last, just for a while.
For you, I am the gentle breeze,
A passing touch, felt but unseen;
A lightning’s dazzle, shows in a flash
A dream before awakening.
You think I am the sun that light,
Giver of life, the world’s delight
Rising to shine, a course was set
Only in time until darkness.
For you I am the endless sky;
Too high to reach only by eyes
A full moon’s shine, silvery light;
Only just one enchanted night.
You said, I am the brilliant sun,
Owned by the skies of dreams that shines;
Do not forget the sun would set,
That’s when I hope to find some rest.
If only faith could make you run,
To find that place before I’m gone;
If only you could at least try
At rainbow’s end, a pot you’ll find.
If you could only close those eyes,
Capture the breeze, a softest touch
If thunder rolls, hope lit your eyes
I will arrive in just a snap.
©2007leofinajanegalleta
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Leofina Jane
March 10, 2008 at 2:10 pm
i’ts such a beautifull …. words…
March 10, 2008 at 2:55 pm
Thank you so much,
March 10, 2008 at 4:18 pm
An egnimatic poem. You’re alluding to something, I think spiritual , not sure. I ask a favor, can you write something about balance? Interested in what you would come up with. Okay, one more favor , can you find a way to email it to me? I know my blog is not working and I ‘m not sure I could find you here. It would be kind of you Thank you.
March 10, 2008 at 5:12 pm
Hello, glad to see you again,
The inspiration of this one comes from different perspectives; yes, search for something spiritual, sigh over an unattainable (or looks like it) romantic circumstance, a challenge and encouragement at the same time for someone who wants something but afraid and uncertain to pursue what he/she wants.
Poem about balance? I will try my best,:-) I hope inspiration will come soonest.:-) I will send a copy to your email once am done with it.. I tried responding to the emailed comments advisory, please advise if indeed i got the correct email address.
The pleasure is mine, thanks to you,:-)
March 10, 2008 at 5:33 pm
You indeed have the correct email adress, how you did that I don’t understand, but I’m glad you did. I await your thoughts, take your time. later
March 10, 2008 at 6:56 pm
this delicate poem reminded me with Wordsworth’s romantic poems. Ithink it expresses something serene about yourself.It’s your special call to unify with nature through its various phenomna.It invites us to mediate about the world,to find the essence of our beingand tofind beauty and peace in God-gifted nature. Please,send me your opinon about my shareand puplish more and more beautiful poems.
March 11, 2008 at 3:22 am
as usual…amazing..
March 11, 2008 at 8:50 am
Hobalee, thanks for the overwhelming comment. It warms my heart and draws out much inspiration to scrawl again,:-)
Most of my poems are products of my meditation hours. I write, without knowing what to expect as the outcome. I just pour out the words dictated by an intense feeling. The outcome usually is a revelation to me,
Sometimes, I’d like to think that my pen is the medium used by the Higher Being to let me see the beauty of wisdom hidden in every circumstance.:-)
Thanks for checking my page out,:-)
March 11, 2008 at 8:54 am
fsxmmm1, please bear with me my friend,:-) I think am having some kind of poetic “imbalance” that I can’t seem to finish my promised poetry about balance.
Am having some kind of emotional excitement at this time,(wink! wink! ) and am trying to discern if the promise of a possibility is clear enough for a go signal,:-)
The soonest I can, I will,
Many thanks!
March 11, 2008 at 8:55 am
decepticon23, your words are music to my pen,
thanks!
March 12, 2008 at 6:40 pm
bear with you? Of course. Things that uplift you are worth waiting for, I have the patience. I think I know what you’re talking about, I’ve found along the way that in matters of of emotion? its right when the head and heart both say yes, when they don’t, you’ve got a battle going on in you, don”t do it. Imust say, that I enjoy this. When you begin to be more open I’ll be pleased to know that you enjoy it too. Listen I am highly anaylitcal and mostly introverted, thats my way. There is something I have say, because it was given to me, I am compelled to give it away, for me it is a valuable thing. What is precious donot make common. You put a smile on your face, okay? fred
March 13, 2008 at 12:26 pm
I agree with you, my friend,:-) It’s even biblical although I can’t qoute it, I can’t remember the exact passage..
, mentioning something like, what is meant to happen is something that smooth-flowing… 
. Yes, the analytical mind is apparent, 
in fact, it’s so rich, I have been learning from your feedbacks,:-) the pleasure is mine, really. 
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