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Jaded Sights

June 3, 2008 — Leofina Jane

NOTE: This poem has been transferred POETIC WORLD

Posted in Art. Tags: english poems ljgalleta. 9 Comments »

9 Responses to “Jaded Sights”

tomachfive Says:
May 7, 2008 at 5:21 am
Many emotions in this poem, it almost like a human being…
drippingmind Says:
May 7, 2008 at 5:44 am
Hello tomachfive,

Thank you so much for the visit, and for your feedback.

Sorry, I forgot the put on the Title a while ago,:-)
Angelo Says:
May 9, 2008 at 2:19 am
Brilliant!

The imagery and symbolism are sophisticated. Very smart.
kunjubi Says:
May 9, 2008 at 1:25 pm
Leofina…Resound of whispers fill
“The empty summer shed
Echoes of cheerful greetings
Remain when light faded.

Lackluster sights paraded
Conquered the gray skies’ stage;
To serenade the half-dead
Imprisoned, forgotten.”
I am spellbound.What scenario u picture there.. Congratulations for this magnificent piece,,,Bless you… vheers. kunjubi
Faye Says:
May 21, 2008 at 5:13 pm
I have seen this poem posted at http://www.iluko.com website. I love it.
James Says:
May 21, 2008 at 5:18 pm
I checked http://www.poets.org and lots of poetry stuff. This thing is interesting. Are you a member of http://www.emanilapoetry.com or http://www.mannurat.com i think those are great literary sites too.
kunjubi Says:
May 27, 2008 at 2:55 am
Leofina….Splendid..My dear it is so inspiring these lines.Some days of wanton madness
Ripples of thrown strength
Unmindful of the bounces
To come as walls repel.
You are a wonderful mystic writer. I envy you… Very good.. Love…. kunjubi
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