Translucent Shores

June 28, 2008 — Leofina Jane

NOTE: This poem has been transferred.

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7 Responses to “Translucent Shores”

  1. marcpogi Says:
    June 30, 2008 at 5:08 pm

    so great, love it!

  2. Ilocano Says:
    July 2, 2008 at 11:04 pm

    Another exellent piece, Ms. Leofina Jane Galleta. As always, your poem fills up the senses. I was transported to your “translucent shores”. Powerful lines in this poem. More please.

  3. Poetryfreak Says:
    July 3, 2008 at 6:21 pm

    Graceful yet profound lines. What i like about your style is that you stimulate the mind of your reader to grasp the underlying thoughts. A mystical mind is what you have drippingmind. More poems like this and you’ll be ready for publication. Keep on writing!

  4. JD Says:
    July 7, 2008 at 1:35 am

    Again Leofina…excellent work.
    <iIn this asylum of wishes,
    The past, frozen in frames..

    Love it. Thank you.
    ~JD

  5. drippingmind Says:
    July 17, 2008 at 11:03 pm

    Thank you so much for the feedbacks gentlemen, :-) hello JD, nice job on MW, hope to join you guys again soon.

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