http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/2008/07/29/sideways/ A Whimsical online world of expressed thoughts, musings, and opinions on anything that matters - from my vantage point... Mon, 21 Dec 2009 06:10:22 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/2008/07/29/sideways/#comment-2448 POETRY OVERLOAD – Romancing With Poems & Verses Thu, 21 May 2009 05:11:45 +0000 http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/?p=71#comment-2448 [...] COMMENTS for this poem @: VANTAGE[VIEW]POINT POETRYCASTLE – Online Community of [...] [...] COMMENTS for this poem @: VANTAGE[VIEW]POINT POETRYCASTLE – Online Community of [...]

]]> http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/2008/07/29/sideways/#comment-2069 POETRY CHAPTER ONE (ljgalleta 2007-2008) « Romancing with English Verses Mon, 27 Apr 2009 14:14:15 +0000 http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/?p=71#comment-2069 [...] COMMENTS for this poem @: VANTAGE[VIEW]POINT POETRYCASTLE - Online Community of Poets PASSIONATE LOVE POEMS [...] [...] COMMENTS for this poem @: VANTAGE[VIEW]POINT POETRYCASTLE – Online Community of Poets PASSIONATE LOVE POEMS [...]

]]> http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/2008/07/29/sideways/#comment-824 drippingmind Tue, 19 Aug 2008 13:57:37 +0000 http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/?p=71#comment-824 Penshadow, many thanks manong razi, :-) so nice to have you here. fact is, there have been instances wherein the outcome of the poem is a revelation to me, just like this one. i started scribbling with no particular plan. i guess the muse took my hand then Penshadow, many thanks manong razi, so nice to have you here. fact is, there have been instances wherein the outcome of the poem is a revelation to me, just like this one. i started scribbling with no particular plan. i guess the muse took my hand then

]]> http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/2008/07/29/sideways/#comment-823 drippingmind Tue, 19 Aug 2008 13:53:57 +0000 http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/?p=71#comment-823 abigailstall, very much appreciated. :-) it means a lot. thank you! abigailstall, very much appreciated. it means a lot. thank you!

]]> http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/2008/07/29/sideways/#comment-816 penshadow Sun, 17 Aug 2008 23:35:39 +0000 http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/?p=71#comment-816 I like this piece of thoughts, LJ. I like this piece of thoughts, LJ.

]]> http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/2008/07/29/sideways/#comment-799 abigailstall Wed, 13 Aug 2008 15:37:57 +0000 http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/?p=71#comment-799 i enjoy reading your pieces. they are deep but sincere, honest but not without beauty. the meter is a lot like the simple rhythm of one processing his or her own thoughts. free, but steady. i enjoy reading your pieces. they are deep but sincere, honest but not without beauty. the meter is a lot like the simple rhythm of one processing his or her own thoughts. free, but steady.

]]> http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/2008/07/29/sideways/#comment-92 drippingmind Tue, 11 Mar 2008 17:29:02 +0000 http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/?p=71#comment-92 THANK YOU SO MUCH for your comments and suggestions. I do appreciate it, very much.:-) I can't agree more with your observation. I replaced the word "rust" with your suggested word, "moss" (silly me, that wasn't even a logical word to use..lol..) I think I have to be more careful with punctuations and usage of words.Again, THANK YOU so much, I learned a lot from your feedback.:-) THANK YOU SO MUCH for your comments and suggestions. I do appreciate it, very much.:-) I can’t agree more with your observation. I replaced the word “rust” with your suggested word, “moss” (silly me, that wasn’t even a logical word to use..lol..)
I think I have to be more careful with punctuations and usage of words.Again, THANK YOU so much, I learned a lot from your feedback.:-)

]]> http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/2008/07/29/sideways/#comment-86 frodo441 Tue, 11 Mar 2008 14:41:55 +0000 http://drippingmind.wordpress.com/?p=71#comment-86 excellent...and very Faustly...I enjoy the meter, when it is not interrupted by grammatical rules ( ; for instance) that break the meter... one note, I would like to suggest that would make this excellent poem better...and I donot wish to judge your artistic preference and right....but I would suggest changing the word "rust" in "there, hungry rust to cling tightly"...to "moss" so that it read "there hungry moss to cling tightly"...I think it does this fine poem much justice and fits well with the theme...I see something beyond in this poem not unlike the ontological struggle in which while your artistic license may actually express in the word "rust"...it just doesn't do the poem justice and is a little out of place in my own interpretation and enjoyment while I read it...rust through me off but the word "moss' i think would be much better and fitting to the etymology that runs current through out the theme....just a note...good visualizations...forget grammar, it's a stick in the gear of such a fine poem... excellent…and very Faustly…I enjoy the meter, when it is not interrupted by grammatical rules ( ; for instance) that break the meter… one note, I would like to suggest that would make this excellent poem better…and I donot wish to judge your artistic preference and right….but I would suggest changing the word “rust” in “there, hungry rust to cling tightly”…to “moss” so that it read “there hungry moss to cling tightly”…I think it does this fine poem much justice and fits well with the theme…I see something beyond in this poem not unlike the ontological struggle in which while your artistic license may actually express in the word “rust”…it just doesn’t do the poem justice and is a little out of place in my own interpretation and enjoyment while I read it…rust through me off but the word “moss’ i think would be much better and fitting to the etymology that runs current through out the theme….just a note…good visualizations…forget grammar, it’s a stick in the gear of such a fine poem…

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