Glances

August 4, 2008 — Leofina Jane

This poem has been transferred.

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11 Responses to “Glances”

  1. JP Says:
    August 4, 2008 at 4:09 am

    That is elegant seduction at its best!

  2. leafless Says:
    August 4, 2008 at 5:26 am

    Love it.

  3. drippingmind Says:
    August 4, 2008 at 10:14 pm

    Elegant seduction. You just put a name to what I was thinking manong joe, :-) . I am sure you will agree with my understanding that it is a priceless “tawid” acquired from the old ways of Ilocana. I can never thank you enough for all your wonderful inputs

  4. drippingmind Says:
    August 4, 2008 at 10:16 pm

    Leafless, your comment is lovely as well, thank you. :-)

  5. Greeneyezz Says:
    August 10, 2008 at 8:12 am

    “unseen but felt”
    Ooh, I sooo identify with that line.

    A Beautiful poem, nicely done.

    ~ZZ

  6. JD Says:
    August 11, 2008 at 3:28 am

    Through the wire
    on spaces,
    unseen-
    but felt.

    Especially loved that line.
    Very very good Leofina.
    And your take on half the world away in ingenious. Well done!
    ~JD

  7. Gentledove Says:
    August 16, 2008 at 10:49 pm

    I do like the way in which you put a thought within a thought

  8. drippingmind Says:
    August 18, 2008 at 9:21 pm

    Greeneyezz, :-) I think we’re on the same page with this one, lol. Thank you!

  9. drippingmind Says:
    August 18, 2008 at 9:25 pm

    Nice to read your comment again, JD, :-)

    I have been tweaking a little bit on my poetry. With this one, I was challenged about the power of words..

    .. the effect of raw honesty of emotions through simple, unassuming words..
    vs.
    …the pull of the layered thoughts embedded in the ramblings of the mystical stuff..

    :-)

    and the verdict is… you guys tell me, :-)

  10. drippingmind Says:
    August 18, 2008 at 9:27 pm

    gentledove,

    I am honored with your first “glance” in my blog. Thank you so much, :-)

  11. watcher Says:
    February 19, 2009 at 11:13 pm

    come
    closer.

    how can it be that
    two words can bind
    a soul towards the spell
    of a glance embedded in
    these one-of-a-kind strokes of art.


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