Running

September 14, 2008 — Leofina Jane

NOTE: This poem has been transferred.

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8 Responses to “Running”

  1. jodirosenberg Says:
    September 11, 2008 at 1:25 pm

    I like that. I have not stumbled upon your blog before. Are you Leofina?

    I admire those who can write peotry. The artful play with words and thoughts is inspiring.

    I have been writing articles about goal setting, a long way from peotry. I am actually taking part in a Write a Book in a Weekend event this weekend. If you are interested in putting your poetry into a book check out the link. Maybe by Monday we will both have books ready to be published.

    http://jodirecommends.weebly.com/

    Thanks for sharing this poem with the world!
    Jodi

  2. drippingmind Says:
    September 11, 2008 at 1:36 pm

    Hello Jodi,:-) thank you for the comment and welcome to my blog,:-)

    Wow, thanks for the idea Jodi, I appreciate the invite,:-). I will definitely check on this. Thanks a lot!

  3. I. Cant Says:
    September 11, 2008 at 2:40 pm

    Very nice. I like your use of the word “Ardently.” It’s not a word commonly used in verse, at least that I’ve seen and to me it is the one word that brings the poem into complete focus. Well done. I’ll be back.

  4. drippingmind Says:
    September 11, 2008 at 3:00 pm

    I. Cant, thank you so much for your comment,:-). Welcome to my blog,:-).

    I’ve been trying to use ordinary, “not-so-poetic” words in my latest poems. Just an effort to bride the gap of diversed understanding due to individual inclinations and viewpoints.:-)

  5. drippingmind Says:
    September 11, 2008 at 3:01 pm

    Sorry, “bridge the gap”, I should say,:-).

  6. eugene Says:
    September 14, 2008 at 3:39 pm

    “And now I met
    you again but-
    running-
    no more.”

    i love this one

    but i’m still
    running
    for fear
    of tulips petals
    closing on me

    i need air
    to breath free
    like flowers visited
    by bees on summer

    and leave there
    prints
    for me
    to ponder on the
    winter

  7. drippingmind Says:
    September 14, 2008 at 3:46 pm

    Hello Eugene, welcome to my blog. I do sense some kind of familiarity…Pardon me, it must be a misplaced one.:-)

    Thank you for the lovely verses,:-).

  8. Poeticsoul Says:
    September 25, 2008 at 2:15 am

    Exquisite penning by a natural poet. You seem to drink and eat poetry, drippingmind. Effortlessly.


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