In To You

September 19, 2008 — Leofina Jane

NOTE: This poem has been transferred.One of my very first poems. Rewritten as a tribute to a newly- engaged friend…:-)

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20 Responses to “In To You”

  1. Sayan Says:
    September 19, 2008 at 10:00 pm

    for a lack of words in my vocabulary, i’ll just put down one: beautiful! :)

  2. drippingmind Says:
    September 19, 2008 at 10:52 pm

    Thanks Sayan!:-) my friend cried when I gave the framed text to her as an engagement gift, she evem wanted it to be their wedding vows. I don’t know if that’s allowed,:-).

  3. JD Says:
    September 20, 2008 at 12:46 am

    To echo Sayan … beautiful. The greatest testament to a well written and powerful piece is the honest reactions of your readers. Well done.
    ~JD

  4. I. Cant Says:
    September 20, 2008 at 9:05 am

    This really is a beautiful poem. Your friend is lucky to have received it as a gift to commence her new life in marriage.

  5. drippingmind Says:
    September 20, 2008 at 9:34 am

    Bless you, JD,:-). I am deeply touched by your words,:-) thank you for the inspiration, cheers!:-)

  6. drippingmind Says:
    September 20, 2008 at 9:39 am

    Hello I.Cant, thank you for your comment,:-) Yes, I was moved by the way she reacted. My purpose was to give them a constant reminder of the beauty of being together, of Love and marriage, although I have yet to prove that myself,lol!

  7. Romanticheart Says:
    September 20, 2008 at 10:03 pm

    I thought I was reading an Elizabeth browning poem. Very romantic penning.

  8. Gentledove Says:
    September 21, 2008 at 5:58 pm

    I love to read your work, that pic at the top is fav.

  9. JD Says:
    September 22, 2008 at 2:03 am

    Hi Leofina Jane

    Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Believe me, it is greatly appreciated :-)

    On another note, there is a poll being displayed at the MW Site that requires your vote, if you haven’t done so already. I would truly appreciate it if you can take the time to go there.

    I hope things are well.
    Take care ok?

    ~JD

  10. drippingmind Says:
    September 22, 2008 at 7:11 am

    Romanticheart, your comment brought me enormous gladness! Elizabeth Barett Browning greatly influenced me. I loved her romantic sonnets!:-)

  11. drippingmind Says:
    September 22, 2008 at 7:13 am

    gentledove, thank you so much, dearest Suz,:-) blessings!

  12. drippingmind Says:
    September 22, 2008 at 7:17 am

    Hi JD, your blog is truly exceptional,:-) it’s a pleasure,:-).

    Just voted at the MW. I commend your efforts in there, I am priviledged to be a part of the Society, thanks to you, :-)

  13. dreammer Says:
    September 23, 2008 at 1:09 pm

    Excellent and beautiful………..you have described the beauty of being together such beautifully that it lets me wonder that is being in love so beautiful!! Must say your friend is lucky to have you as a friend and such gift for engagement :)

    HAVE A NICE DAY!!

  14. J. P. Jones Says:
    September 24, 2008 at 12:26 pm

    drippingmind, will you marry me?:-)

    God, I fell in love with you through your poems!

  15. Max Coutinho Says:
    September 24, 2008 at 10:10 pm

    Hey Leo!

    My Lord: beautiful poem!!!
    It is funny because I know exactly what you are talking about here…it is like love as some basic vocabulary that is common to everybody.

    Eyes that are an eternal hope…lips that are paradise…loving arms where one will reside…heart that is life…
    Can everybody see the beauty of this? The immense beauty of these words…

    Amazingly crafted *bowing*!

    Cheers

  16. drippingmind Says:
    September 25, 2008 at 12:28 am

    Hey there, dreammer!:-) thanks, dear friend. I’ve been trying to figure out that same thought..how wonderful love can be for those who already found it..as for me, don’t know if it’s with the future to come, or it already passed me by..:-). Ever watched “Runaway Bride”…? I think, I’ve been doing something like that,lol!

  17. drippingmind Says:
    September 25, 2008 at 12:32 am

    J.P. Jones..good to know that’s not a proposal. I might have grabbed my running shoes, right away, lol:-).

    Thank you for the feedback. Cheers!:-)

  18. drippingmind Says:
    September 25, 2008 at 12:42 am

    Hey there Max!:-) Always great to see you here, my dear, that’s an overwhelming comment, thank you, and hugs,:-). I was, and still is, down with the flu. It’s the weather, I guess.:-)

    Hmmmm…:-) you got me thinking with your comment, my dear:-) Am I correct to assume that you are one of the blessed ones who have known love, with a beauty such as what I was thinking while rewriting this poem? :-) If the answer is yes, I must say, I am so happy for you dear! :-)

  19. tony Says:
    October 6, 2008 at 7:43 am

    good words

  20. drippingmind Says:
    October 10, 2008 at 6:46 pm

    Hi tony!:-) thanks a lot!


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